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தூறல்.........
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10-15-2005, 07:58 PM
பிரியசகி,
காதலுள் கரைந்துவிட்டீர்கள் போல. கவிதை நன்றாகவே வருகிறது. சில இடங்களில் தடுக்கல்கள். ஒரே எழுத்தில் அடுத்தடுத்து தொடங்கியதால் அலுப்படிக்க வைக்கிறது. மற்றும்படி சண்முகி அவர்கள் குறிப்பிட்ட அந்தப் பந்திகள் இரண்டும் அருமையான வரிகள். அதோடு இதனையும் சேர்த்துக் கொள்கிறேன்:

ஆனாலும்..
அவன் கொண்ட அதிசயங்களை
அறிந்து விட்டேன் என்றால்
அது உண்மையாக பொய்யே...

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