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என் நாட்குறிப்பில்கிறுக்கியது
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11-14-2003, 07:22 PM
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இன்ப அதிர்ச்சி
மிக அருகில் நீ..

வெள்ளை நிறச்சுடிதாரும்
ஊதா நிறத் துப்பட்டாவும்
உன்னழகில் மேருகு பெற்றிருந்தன...
இன்னும் காயாது ஈரமாய் உன்கூந்தல்..
அதில்
மல்லிகைப்புூக்கள் பேறு பெற்றிருந்தன..

ஒரு நொடி
நான் உன்னைப்பார்க்க
நீ என்னைப்பார்க்க
கண்ணுக்குள் மின்னல் பாய்ந்தது

உன் கண்களின் பிரகாசம்
என்னை தலைகுனிய வைத்தது

ஆனாலும் என்மனம் இன்னும்
ஒரு தடவை அந்தப்பார்வை வேண்டுமென்று
அடம்பிடித்தது
மீண்டும் பார்த்தபோது நீயும்
தலைகுனிந்திருந்தாய்..

என்னை அங்கு எதிர்பார்த்திராததால்
எற்பட்ட உணர்ச்சிகள் உன்முகத்தில்

என் படபடப்பு
உன்னையும் தொற்றிக்கொண்டதோ?

நீ தலைநிமிர
மீண்டும் அதே மின்னல்...
குனிந்துகொண்டேன்

நீயும் நானும் மட்டும்
இப்போது தண்ணீர்குழாயருகில்
மூடி இருந்த குழாயை திறந்து
உனக்காக வழிவிட்டேன்...

நீர் உன்பாதங்களில் பரவி
வழிந்தோடியது...

நானும் கழுவி நிமிர்ந்தபோது
நீ நடந்துகொண்டிருந்தாய்...

நீ சென்ற பாதையில் ஈரமாக
காலடிகள்..
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[No subject] - by aathipan - 11-08-2003, 06:36 PM
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